Talk about impulsive! The Romeo in the original romance art sounds about as stable as a two-legged table.
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SCENE: We see two pairs of hands reaching towards each other across a restaurant table. The woman's has an engagement ring on her finger.
WOMAN: I love the engagement ring! It’s so much nicer than the ones men usually give me!
Art: Vince Colletta Studio Color: Allen Freeman
©2013 Last Kiss Inc
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WOMAN: I love the engagement ring! It’s so much nicer than the ones men usually give me!
Art: Vince Colletta Studio Color: Allen Freeman
©2013 Last Kiss Inc
37.1.7.2dfgdfg but labeled 37.1.7.3
The original is more absurd than the rewrite.
I totally agree, Azathoth.
From the word “men” I thought it was Ellen DeGeneres with the black suit coat.
I was thinking it was a man in the suit, but—sure. It could be a woman.
To clarify my thinking, I was sent in that direction by “men usually” instead of “other men.”