I’m not sure why this guy is still smiling. Maybe he enjoys sexual frustration and begging. Or maybe he’s smiling while he plans his escape…and inches backwards towards the door!
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WOMAN (to man): You don’t have to beg for sex, sweetie! There’ll be plenty of time for that after we’re married
John,
Your line works as a stand-alone! However you new selection with re-do by Jourdain are a lot better in the new version of 1 July, 2018:
Selection – new selection much better for the actual exchange … an action rather than a listening.
Artwork re-do – the re-do takes full advantage of the possibilities that couldn’t have been realized in the original, both technically to reproduce and appropriate to the times and visual understandings of mass pub readerships.. Great editing and recoloring !!!
Dick, I really appreciate the feedback. One of my goals in revamping the gag was to pair it with art that seemed more appropriate and would feed the humor. It sounds like I succeeded. Thanks!